「非常希望在这里学习的机会能让我的理性和感性的素养得到升华」该怎么翻译成英文？ 第1页

机器翻译了一下。

I very much hope that the opportunity to study here will elevate my rational and emotional competence.

如果您很喜欢 “升华”这个字眼， 那就代人 “is subliming”：

I very much hope that the opportunity of studying here is subliming my rational and emotional competence.

如果觉得 VERY MUCH 太陋， 那就换一个同义词 “earnestly”：

I earnestly hope that the opportunity of studying here is subliming my rational and emotional competence.

如果喜欢被动句， 那就换一个写法：

I earnestly hope my rational and emotional competence to be sublimed by the opportunity of studying here.

如果觉得 earnestly 和 sublimed 太装 )x(, 那就换一些个同义词、句式：

I sincerely look forward to the opportunity of studying here, which will refine my rational and emotional competence.